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I'm Sorry Too, Mr. Frost ...

Stopping by a Trash Container on a Snowy Afternoon

 

Whose junk this is I think I know.

The workers are on lunch break, though;

they will not mind me stopping here

to shoot this junk piled up with snow.

 

My camera must think it queer

to stop without an easement near,

nor pile of bricks, nor glassy break

on this first snow day of the year.

 

I give my camera a shake.

The flash is on. There's some mistake.

The woman who's come out to sweep

regards me as an utter flake.

 

The truck pulls up and starts to beep,

but I have images to keep,

and much to upload ere I sleep,

and much to upload ere I sleep.

COMMENTS
Graspless said at 1:05 a.m. on Feb 10, 2008:
This is really cool. The 'junk' covered in snow, as it is, rally reminds me of beignets or soapapias heavy with powdered sugar or sentient beings trying to climb out of the dumpster towards freedom.
SteveBrisendine said at 1:16 a.m. on Feb 10, 2008:
I have to give credit where it's due. Memotions' "I'm Sorry Robert Frost" Tabblo was in the back of my mind after I shot this and a few other photos.
Leeuwjan said at 4:57 a.m. on Feb 10, 2008:
Terrific photo, nice poem - well done!
Rheap said at 6:16 a.m. on Feb 10, 2008:
Great tabblo..
SeánanForbes said at 11:37 a.m. on Feb 10, 2008:
Terrific.
Decoy said at 6:58 p.m. on Feb 10, 2008:
I like the feeling this gives me! Well done! =)
Chiloedream said at 7:58 p.m. on Feb 10, 2008:
Une image géniale, un bon poème, merci mon ami.
Noe said at 10:08 p.m. on Feb 10, 2008:
Really cool Steve! =)
Umauma said at 10:34 p.m. on Feb 10, 2008:
Great Steve and the poem creates another picture!
Umauma said at 10:35 p.m. on Feb 10, 2008:
The poem creates it's own pictures..Great shot !
Domieb2 said at 3:59 p.m. on Feb 11, 2008:
Love the poem! Great spin on a great original... :-)
Pkeener said at 5:54 p.m. on Feb 11, 2008:
..and much to upload ere i sleep....one hand clapping here! so creative, steve. and th ephot aint so bad either...
Memotions said at 6:56 p.m. on Feb 11, 2008:
Oh Steve....this totally cracks me up!!!!! LOL Hey I appreciate the credit.....but we both know it was Robert Frost. It was such an easy poem to reassemble, don't you think..... it was just waiting for a little injection of comedy. Kudos....this is just great.
SteveBrisendine said at 8:20 p.m. on Feb 11, 2008:
Thanks, all ... and thanks, too, to Robert Frost. One of my favorite poets.
Debdog said at 1:01 a.m. on Feb 14, 2008:
OH HAHA!! this is GREAT! Steve, in case you did not know, Memotions,,,(above) is MY sister Patty! She's in Canada, and I'm in Florida :) CLEVER CLEVER :)
SteveBrisendine said at 10:08 p.m. on Feb 14, 2008:
I remember thinking that you two were sisters ... I'm glad you both liked this.
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