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5x5: For Adelaide

 

 

 

 

Adelaide Crapsey (1878-1914) devised the American cinquain, a five-line poetry form. The first line has two syllables, the second has four, the third has six, the fourth has eight and the fifth has two. These are five of her poems, written between 1911 and 1913.

November Night

 

Listen ...

With faint dry sound,

Like steps of passing ghosts,

The leaves, frost-crisp'd, break from the trees

And fall.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Amaze

 

I know

Not these my hands

And yet I think there was

A woman like  me once had hands

Like these.

The Warning

 

Just now,

Out of the strange,

Still dusk ... as strange, as still ...

A white moth flew. Why am I grown

So cold?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Triad

 

These be

Three silent things:

The falling snow ... the hour

Before the dawn ... the mouth of one

Just dead.

Snow

 

Look up ...

From bleakening hills

Blows down the light, first breath

Of wintry wind ... look up, and scent

The snow!

COMMENTS
SeánanForbes said at 2:23 p.m. on Feb 12, 2008:
An excellent pairing of words and pictures. It is especially fine to see the joining of words and pictures done by someone who is strongly skilled in both.
Memotions said at 2:24 p.m. on Feb 12, 2008:
Absolute perfection Steve. Poetry and images are wonderful matches for one another. Bravo!
Wildthing said at 2:33 p.m. on Feb 12, 2008:
Stunning images and words. Mike.
Noe said at 2:36 p.m. on Feb 12, 2008:
Wow... interesting! And great shots as always Steve, very nice tabblo...
DocEna said at 2:38 p.m. on Feb 12, 2008:
Steve this is a marvelous Tabblo...the poetry in syntony with your pictures...
Klfillar said at 2:56 p.m. on Feb 12, 2008:
Perfect pairings of poem and picture. I wasn't familiar with this poet, but I want to read more of her work now.
Tishfish said at 3:04 p.m. on Feb 12, 2008:
WOW This is very nice!!!!!
Pkeener said at 5:16 p.m. on Feb 12, 2008:
ok...now i know we are twins from different mothers. Being a fan of haiku, i am also a huge fan of Crapsey and her poetry. i have been wanting to do a tabblo with one of her poems. this is a perfect tabblo tribute to her. your pairings are spot on! thank you.
Decoy said at 5:30 p.m. on Feb 12, 2008:
I love the clean layout you made for this! It feels fresh, as the photos. I cant fully understand and appreciate the poems, not having english as my fluently language, but I can still apreciate this tabblo. It's very good Steven! Thanks!
Umauma said at 5:35 p.m. on Feb 12, 2008:
Simply beautiful, the heartfelt poems..(thankyou for introducing me to her work) and the wonderful photographs..An incredible mood you've created..
Chiloedream said at 6:16 p.m. on Feb 12, 2008:
J'ADORE, images et poésies. Du GRAND ART. Merci Steve, salut mon ami.
Candlepower said at 6:17 p.m. on Feb 12, 2008:
Great Tabblo the poems and phots so well matched.
Snooway said at 7:55 p.m. on Feb 12, 2008:
Wonderful!!
Mashpee_Paula said at 9:09 p.m. on Feb 12, 2008:
Superbe, Steve!!! Brilliant, creative, unique.....your photos depict the poems beautifully! Thank you, Steve! :)
SteveBrisendine said at 10:47 p.m. on Feb 12, 2008:
Thank you all for your more than kind comments. If I had a hand in introducing anyone to Adelaide Crapsey's work, I'm glad. So much of her poetry has a sad beauty about it ...
Leftofcenter said at 7:42 a.m. on Feb 13, 2008:
once in a while there will be this one tabblo.......... this is the one (for me). a jewel. the images, the poetry. just perfect.
Debdog said at 11:15 a.m. on Feb 13, 2008:
beautiful!!!!!!!!!!! love the poetry... perfect.. :) MY TOD :)
Debdog said at 11:15 a.m. on Feb 13, 2008:
a fav
Eduardo.affonso said at 12:10 p.m. on Feb 13, 2008:
Beautiful photos and great poetry. Thanks for introducing me to Adelaide Crapsey.
Graspless said at 4:09 p.m. on Feb 13, 2008:
The pictures move down the screen like the journalings of a free day.
Love the incorporation of your poetry phrases with your photos!
Abking said at 11:37 p.m. on Feb 13, 2008:
I love the economical delineations of mystery these poems and photos achieve. I'm a fan of poetry but somehow never crossed paths with the work of Adelaide Crapsey.
SteveBrisendine said at 12:12 a.m. on Feb 14, 2008:
Thank you again for the kind comments. They are much appreciated. And I'm so, so glad to see people discovering Adelaide Crapsey's poetry.
Charlespop said at 3:17 a.m. on Feb 14, 2008:
Absolutely beautiful !
ConnieL said at 9:28 p.m. on Feb 14, 2008:
Steve, this is wonderful! Love the photos and the poetry.
SteveBrisendine said at 9:56 p.m. on Feb 14, 2008:
Thank you. I was hoping the images would be equal to her words.
Mirella said at 2:38 a.m. on Feb 15, 2008:
Beautiful, nothing else!
SteveBrisendine said at 9:54 p.m. on Feb 16, 2008:
Thank you. I really enjoyed making this one.
Welshchick said at 3:47 a.m. on Feb 19, 2008:
A wonderful tribute Steve ~ poignant is the word.
SteveBrisendine said at 8:03 p.m. on Feb 19, 2008:
Thank you, Rhonda. She really is one of my favorite poets.
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